Sunday, June 29, 2008

One day the fox was hungry. And he sees the crow has cheese. He wants to eat the cheese but he can't fly. Then he thinks how I can get the cheese. And he gets some idea. Then he say to crow "wow your voice is beautiful. You have the best voice in world". The crow he is very shy and happy. And he says "really I didn't herd this before". The fox say "really I want to listen to your voice try to sing". Then the crow sing and the cheese dropped to the ground, while the fox go to got the cheese and eat it. Then the fox says "Do not trust flatterers"

1 comment:

Jeff said...

Good story with a useful moral.

Advice: Remember to use a comma before a quote, and to put the period inside the quotation marks.